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I wonder if a hint of a nose on the silhouetted person would help, even if it comes right off the angle of the forehead. Also, the legs are two different weights, just find a middle ground I think. I wonder if the date could go at the bottom with the other info. If you need to expland it you could spell out:

NOVEMBER 20, 2021 | 9PM

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His name feels a little cramped up there. Can it bump up a bit so the same amount is hanging over on top as there is on the side? You could move "Artist Talk" down to right about Bruce Gallery and bump that whole section of text over to the left so it has some padding between it and the lamp post.

Scott Gladd, MFA
Scott Gladd, MFA

Written by Scott Gladd, MFA

Unequal parts creative director, writer, educator, type designer, father figure, Labrador Retriever. Have laptop, will travel. www.tessellate.vcfa.work

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