Are you squishing the type together in some instances and stretching it in others? Some of the photos look that was as well. Feels like there is a lot to look at here and the tone feels as though it's a kids menu. The multiple styles of typography feel haphazard.

Scott Gladd, MFA
Scott Gladd, MFA

Written by Scott Gladd, MFA

Unequal parts creative director, writer, educator, type designer, father figure, Labrador Retriever. Have laptop, will travel. www.tessellate.vcfa.work

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