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I think you can lose the underline within the first menu. How can you add focus to the name without it being so obvious like an underline?

The second one is harder to read because of the colors and the lack of contrast between fonts. Maybe bold and regular type? The photos feel scattered and unorganized. What options are they belonging to?

The third one is very hard to read. The outline around the text makes it blurry. The oversaturated colors are making it hard to look at too. How can you delineate the soup options without the triangles? Is this font the right font for a soup restaurant. Seems a little sporty.

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Scott Gladd, MFA
Scott Gladd, MFA

Written by Scott Gladd, MFA

Unequal parts creative director, writer, educator, type designer, father figure, Labrador Retriever. Have laptop, will travel. www.tessellate.vcfa.work

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