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One and two are a little too similar in approach. The images in the second have some strange cropping going on.

All caps in a script is generally not a good idea as we usually don't write in cursive that way. The third feels incomplete to me. The bottom and right side have issues of spacing don't feel like they are designed with purpose in mind.

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Scott Gladd, MFA
Scott Gladd, MFA

Written by Scott Gladd, MFA

Unequal parts creative director, writer, educator, type designer, father figure, Labrador Retriever. Have laptop, will travel. www.tessellate.vcfa.work

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