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The first two are very successful. There are some spatial issues like the bowl of soup being rather close to the word soups on the second one and alignment with the headers, especially with the kale and sweet potato chowder.

The third menu seems a little scattered and feels too vertical on a horizontal orientation. Almost feels like a website rather than a menu. I think the biggest problem is the lack of organization.

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Scott Gladd, MFA
Scott Gladd, MFA

Written by Scott Gladd, MFA

Unequal parts creative director, writer, educator, type designer, father figure, Labrador Retriever. Have laptop, will travel. www.tessellate.vcfa.work

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